tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5004918022893689904.post5232562387458536981..comments2010-04-16T14:05:14.402+07:00Comments on GARASI KADANG BERISI: DICARI:MALAIKATari koeswardinihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17479242566460340462noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5004918022893689904.post-31402473687927539462008-10-20T20:16:00.000+07:002008-10-20T20:16:00.000+07:00hi zee...noted, known u as "the most fanatic fans"...hi zee...<BR/>noted, known u as "the most fanatic fans" of this girl hahaha..<BR/>well... maybe if i'm lucky and u're lucky, u'll get to see my scratches .. :P<BR/>for the mean time, lets wait for what this girl next story..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5004918022893689904.post-68327756650478185192008-10-19T11:31:00.000+07:002008-10-19T11:31:00.000+07:00Buat anonymous: "Knapa cuma Zee doang yang comment...Buat anonymous: <BR/>"Knapa cuma Zee doang yang comment"<BR/>- Karna Zee itu salah satu temen baiknya Ari yang sangat amat bener2 suka baca cerpen, novel, buku, dan suka baca blog2 orang gituh. Trus dia juga temen yg supportive gituh...if you wanna know the truth..hehe :D<BR/><BR/>Btw, Blog lo apa? Pasti suka nulis dan baca juga yah... ;)<BR/><BR/>Cheers!zeepsyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04433472277023721910noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5004918022893689904.post-43721951782924481922008-10-18T21:55:00.000+07:002008-10-18T21:55:00.000+07:00first time seeing u're blog... i'm stounded! astho...first time seeing u're blog... i'm stounded! asthonished!<BR/>really awsome!beautiful pictures and the story u wrote really flows.<BR/>like the story on the angel thing, gets me blank in the end of the story..hmm, is that one of the purpose of writing it? :)<BR/>btw, kenapa cuma nemu zee doang yang comment... hihihi<BR/>others also interesting, but keep it not to long might be better.<BR/>will read your blog more often !Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5004918022893689904.post-55495131796028671042008-10-17T12:37:00.000+07:002008-10-17T12:37:00.000+07:00Ri, gak usah repot2 nyuruh gw liat blog lo tiap ha...Ri, gak usah repot2 nyuruh gw liat blog lo tiap hari. Tanpa lo suruh pun, tanpa lo posting sesuatu yg baru pun. Tiap hari, tiap gw browsing, udah otomatis gw buka blog elo... Udah kayak facebook... :Dzeepsyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04433472277023721910noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5004918022893689904.post-12153216911432028502008-10-17T08:18:00.000+07:002008-10-17T08:18:00.000+07:00gosipnya nih zee...gosipnya...malaikat, dewa itu k...gosipnya nih zee...gosipnya...malaikat, dewa itu kelamin ga jelas, mereka tuh androgini, cewe dan cowo pun iya, jadi emang dibiarin gitu aja, si "aku" dibiarin beropini sendiri tanpa ada kelanjutan ini jadinya cowo apa cewe...bukan banci ya...<BR/><BR/>terus, iya si "aku" itu mati, karena banjir karena si malaikat menangis, hmmm...ada berberapa yang harus gue sedikit edit, thanks ya zee!ari koeswardinihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17479242566460340462noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5004918022893689904.post-2080290784436353812008-10-17T08:08:00.000+07:002008-10-17T08:08:00.000+07:00This comment has been removed by the author.ari koeswardinihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17479242566460340462noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5004918022893689904.post-56631902931907705212008-10-17T05:57:00.000+07:002008-10-17T05:57:00.000+07:00This comment has been removed by the author.zeepsyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04433472277023721910noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5004918022893689904.post-23515377123590206872008-10-17T05:54:00.000+07:002008-10-17T05:54:00.000+07:00Ide ceritanya bagus. Flow-nya enak.Jadi malaikatny...Ide ceritanya bagus. Flow-nya enak.<BR/><BR/>Jadi malaikatnya laki-laki? Awalnya si "aku" gak tau si malaikat itu laki2 atau perempuan. Trus tiba2 di paragrap keberapa gituh, si "aku" sort of decided right on the spot bahwa malaikatnya laki-laki, tanpa mendeskripsikan gimana akhirnya dia tau kalo malaikat itu laki2. Jadi agak jumping. (sorry a reader like me selalu pengen tau kejadian secara detail, hehe... Bukan kritikal, cuma analitikal aja kok, hehe)<BR/><BR/>Trus, jadi endingnya dia gak di cubicle lagi? Soalnya dia bangun dari imajinasi dan tiba2 masih di tempat yg sama dengan malaikat itu. Bearti dia mati?<BR/>Apakah cerpen ini gayanya emang modern literature, dimana ending-nya terserah pada pembaca saja?zeepsyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04433472277023721910noreply@blogger.com